From 91a278b0bedd84654f65f17c9f6e28df95edec74 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: rsiddharth <s@ricketyspace.net>
Date: Mon, 8 Apr 2019 22:40:38 -0400
Subject: html/index.html: Update four essential freedoms.

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 html/index.html | 29 ++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/html/index.html b/html/index.html
index 2513f35..d6e2197 100644
--- a/html/index.html
+++ b/html/index.html
@@ -99,25 +99,24 @@
 
                             <ul>
                                 <li>The freedom to run the program as
-                                they wish, for any purpose (freedom
-                                0).</li>
+                                they wish, for any purpose (freedom 0).</li>
 
                                 <li>The freedom to study how the
-                                program works, and adapt it to their
-                                needs (freedom 1). Access to the
-                                source code is a precondition for
-                                this.</li>
+                                program works, and change it so it
+                                does their computing as they wish
+                                (freedom 1). Access to the source code
+                                is a precondition for this.</li>
 
                                 <li>The freedom to redistribute copies
-                                so they can help their neighbor
-                                (freedom 2).</li>
-
-                                <li>The freedom to improve the
-                                program, and release their
-                                improvements to the public, so that
-                                the whole community benefits (freedom
-                                3). Access to the source code is a
-                                precondition for this.</li>
+                                so they can help others (freedom 2).</li>
+
+                                <li>The freedom to distribute copies
+                                of their modified versions to others
+                                (freedom 3). By doing this they can
+                                give the whole community a chance to
+                                benefit from their changes. Access to
+                                the source code is a precondition for
+                                this.</li>
                             </ul>
 
                         </div>
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