From b39d90065d2ca0764f0a1b1d52a3751fab2491fa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: rsiddharth Date: Fri, 18 Oct 2019 21:19:38 -0400 Subject: nsfw/junk/coitus: Some editing. --- nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm | 2 +- nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm | 4 ++-- nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw | 4 ++-- nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm | 5 ++--- 4 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm index fa45b22..274f143 100644 --- a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm +++ b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Tongues knot. He groans. You rub your lips Down his throat -To his hairy chest +To his chest And over his navel and onto his shaft. You ravage him with a stunning fellatio. He slams you with his thighs, diff --git a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm index ea2a837..6198983 100644 --- a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm +++ b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ You skitter towards the bed. Strip. -Fling yourself into on the bed. +Fling yourself on the bed. Kiss him. Tongues knot. He groans. @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ It reflects you but is squishy. You touch it. Abruptly, the mirror strikes -you with a sliver glow +you with a silver glow and sucks you into nothingness. Next thing. diff --git a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw index 896a76b..a89aa5d 100644 --- a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw +++ b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ You skitter towards the bed. Strip. -Fling yourself into on the bed. +Fling yourself on the bed. Kiss her. Tongues knot. She moans. @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ It reflects you but is squishy. You touch it. Abruptly, the mirror strikes -you with a sliver glow +you with a silver glow and sucks you into it. Into nothingness. diff --git a/nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm b/nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm index be1bdef..5327674 100644 --- a/nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm +++ b/nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm @@ -9,9 +9,8 @@ reading Ray Bradbury's "Fahrenheit 451". He notices you at the other corner of the room. He puts the book aside and with carnal menace fingers his dick -into a boner, then does a -"I'll lick your pussy" V signal with his -fingers and tongue. +into a boner and shows you the V signal +with his fingers and tongue. He lecherously stares at you for sometime and gets back to his book. -- cgit v1.2.3