From 9ed97281487d93a1a805bea3cce78d7e153e0b41 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: rsiddharth <s@ricketyspace.net>
Date: Sat, 26 Oct 2019 16:49:25 -0400
Subject: nfsw/templates/terms.html: Update privacy policy.

---
 nfsw/templates/terms.html | 26 +++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

(limited to 'nfsw')

diff --git a/nfsw/templates/terms.html b/nfsw/templates/terms.html
index d24c481..8fabebb 100644
--- a/nfsw/templates/terms.html
+++ b/nfsw/templates/terms.html
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
                     possibility of such damages.</p>
 
                 <div class="lastupdated">
-                    <p>Last Updated on the 21st October 2019</p>
+                    <p>Last Updated on the 21<sup>st</sup> October 2019</p>
                 </div>
             </section>
 
@@ -36,24 +36,20 @@
                     <h1>Privacy Policy</h1>
                 </header>
 
-                <p>All your interactions with NFSW game or your "game state"
-                    will be stashed in a temporary cache.</p>
+                <p>All your interactions with NFSW game or your &ldquo;game
+                    state&rdquo; will be stashed in a temporary cache.</p>
 
-                <p>Data in the temporary cache attributable to you may be
-                    removed when the game is reset or when game's janitor
-                    decides to clean it up or when the server gets obliterated
-                    on the January 2<sup>nd</sup> 2020.</p>
+                <p>The game server will also log your IP address
+                    automatically each time you communicate with
+                    it.</p>
 
-                <p>The game server might also log your IP address
-                    automatically each time you communicate with it. Access
-                    logs will be purged on the same day the server gets
-                    obliterated.</p>
-
-                <p>Lastly, remember that you're on the Internet where Privacy
-                    is not a first class citizen. Tread with caution.</p>
+                <p>Any data attributable to you will be stored
+                    indefinitely on the game server. It will be purged
+                    when the server gets obliterated by the janitor in
+                    the first week of January 2020.</p>
 
                 <div class="lastupdated">
-                    <p>Last Updated on the 21st October 2019</p>
+                    <p>Last Updated on the 26<sup>nd</sup> October 2019</p>
                 </div>
             </section>
 
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