edited chapter five.

 - Google Drive/Dropbox server -> Google Drive/Dropbox data store.
 - Fixed typos.
 - combox version 0.2.2 -> combox version 0.2.3.

1 files changed, 24 insertions, 23 deletions

diff --git a/report/chapters/5-con-f.tex b/report/chapters/5-con-f.tex
index 0a459b4..0273c5e 100644
--- a/report/chapters/5-con-f.tex
+++ b/report/chapters/5-con-f.tex
@@ -6,15 +6,15 @@
   about building and creating things in a self-motivated and
   self-directed way.}{\textit{Moxie Marlinspike}}
 
-combox is at a stage where it can be used by users as a tool to use
-the storage provided by two file storage providers -- Google Drive and
-Dropbox -- such that only part of each file in the encrypted form is
-stored on the computers of the file storage providers; this method of
-storing files on file storage providers makes it difficult but not
-impossible for ``third parties'' to gain access to the user's personal
-files.
+combox is at a stage where it can be used as a tool to use the storage
+provided by two file storage providers -- Google Drive and Dropbox --
+such that only part of each file in the encrypted form is stored on
+the data store of the file storage providers; this method of storing
+files on file storage providers makes it difficult but not impossible
+for file storage providers or ``third parties'' to gain access to the
+user's personal files.
 
-combox is at version 0.2.2, it is a python package licensed under the
+combox is at version 0.2.3, it is a python package licensed under the
 GNU General Public License version 3 or later. It is compatible with
 GNU/Linux and OS X. The program is considered to be in ``alpha'' stage
 and must be used for experimental use only, it is not recommended to
@@ -43,30 +43,30 @@ follows is a non-exhaustive list of things to do in the future:
   to the node directories. This assumption was found to be not true
   when manually testing combox with node clients (Google Drive and
   Dropbox client that sync files to/from the respective node
-  directories to/from their respective servers); both the Google Drive
-  and the Dropbox client make modifications to the Google Drive and
-  Dropbox directory respectively whenever pulling a modified shard
-  from their server to this computer, this behavior broke combox and
-  major changes were made to the \verb+combox.events+ module to make
-  it understand the node client's behavior in the node directory;
-  these changes, increased the complexity of the classes defined in
-  the \verb+combox.events+; it would be great to re-think this module
-  in such a way that it reduces its complexity.
+  directories to/from their respective data stores); both the Google
+  Drive and the Dropbox client make modifications to the Google Drive
+  and Dropbox directory respectively whenever pulling a modified shard
+  from their data store to the user's computer, this behavior broke
+  combox and major changes were made to the \verb+combox.events+
+  module to make it understand the node client's behavior in the node
+  directory; these changes, increased the complexity of the classes
+  defined in the \verb+combox.events+; it would be great to re-think
+  this module in such a way that it reduces its complexity.
 \item Evaluate if more information needs to tracked about each file in
   the combox directory; at the moment, combox only keeps track of the
-  SHA256 hash of each file stored in the combox directory.
+  SHA-256 hash of each file stored in the combox directory.
 \item Support more file storage providers; for this, ideally no code
   needs to be written for supporting a new file storage provider,
   combox must be tested with the new file storage provider's directory
   as a node directory. If the new file storage provider's client (that
-  sync's the shards their servers) makes non-standard changes to its
+  sync's the shards their data store) makes non-standard changes to its
   directory (like the official Dropbox and Google Drive clients do),
   then the \verb+combox.events.NodeDirMonitor+ must be accordingly
   updated to make combox cognizant about the file storage provider
   client's non-standard behavior.
 \item Make unit tests more modular. At the moment, there are some unit
   test functions that test more than one usecase/facet of a function
-  or class; for instance, the \verb+test_CDM+ test method part of the
+  or class; for instance, the \verb+test_CDM+ test method, part of the
   the \verb+tests.events_test.TestEvents+ test class tests the
   correctness of the \verb+combox.events.ComboxDirMonitor+ for file
   creation, deletion, rename and modification; this method would
@@ -77,9 +77,10 @@ follows is a non-exhaustive list of things to do in the future:
   \ref{a-python3c} for more information on this.
 \item Support Microsoft Windows. The way to make combox compatible
   with Windows will be to run unit tests on Windows, the failing tests
-  might give pointers to what parts of combox needs to be changed in
-  order for it to be compatible with Windows. Individuals interested
-  in making combox compatible with Windows might find
+  might give pointers to what parts of combox needs to be
+  changed/updated in order for it to be compatible with
+  Windows. Individuals interested in making combox compatible with
+  Windows might find
   \url{https://ricketyspace.net/combox/setup/#windows} useful; it
   contains information about setting up the development environment
   for combox on Windows.