Update nfsw/junk/strayed/intro

1 files changed, 8 insertions, 8 deletions

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@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ when they were 5 years old.
 The fourth wall is directly opposite to
 you. The screen on it is displaying what
 seems to be a diary entry. It has coffee
-stains.
+stains on it.
 
 The diary entry reads:
 
@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ The diary entry reads:
 > shook. Asking what the fuck only
 > brought it around. Around and around
 > it went, my grandfather’s cock in my
-> hands, the memory if it so vivid, so
-> palpable, so very much a part of
-> me. It came to me during sex and not
-> during sex. It came to me in flashes
-> and it came to me in dreams. It came
-> to me one day when I found a baby
-> bird, fallen from a tree.
+> hands, the memory if [sic] it so
+> vivid, so palpable, so very much a
+> part of me. It came to me during sex
+> and not during sex. It came to me in
+> flashes and it came to me in
+> dreams. It came to me one day when I
+> found a baby bird, fallen from a tree.
 
 > I’d always heard that you’re not
 > supposed to pick up baby birds; that