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authorrsiddharth <s@ricketyspace.net>2019-04-08 22:40:38 -0400
committerrsiddharth <s@ricketyspace.net>2019-04-08 22:40:38 -0400
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html/index.html: Update four essential freedoms.
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<ul>
<li>The freedom to run the program as
- they wish, for any purpose (freedom
- 0).</li>
+ they wish, for any purpose (freedom 0).</li>
<li>The freedom to study how the
- program works, and adapt it to their
- needs (freedom 1). Access to the
- source code is a precondition for
- this.</li>
+ program works, and change it so it
+ does their computing as they wish
+ (freedom 1). Access to the source code
+ is a precondition for this.</li>
<li>The freedom to redistribute copies
- so they can help their neighbor
- (freedom 2).</li>
-
- <li>The freedom to improve the
- program, and release their
- improvements to the public, so that
- the whole community benefits (freedom
- 3). Access to the source code is a
- precondition for this.</li>
+ so they can help others (freedom 2).</li>
+
+ <li>The freedom to distribute copies
+ of their modified versions to others
+ (freedom 3). By doing this they can
+ give the whole community a chance to
+ benefit from their changes. Access to
+ the source code is a precondition for
+ this.</li>
</ul>
</div>