nsfw/junk/coitus: Some editing.

4 files changed, 7 insertions, 8 deletions

diff --git a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm
index fa45b22..274f143 100644
--- a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm
+++ b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-fm
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Tongues knot.
 He groans.
 You rub your lips
 Down his throat
-To his hairy chest
+To his chest
 And over his navel and onto his shaft.
 You ravage him with a stunning fellatio.
 He slams you with his thighs,
diff --git a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm
index ea2a837..6198983 100644
--- a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm
+++ b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mm
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 You skitter towards the bed.
 Strip.
-Fling yourself into on the bed.
+Fling yourself on the bed.
 Kiss him.
 Tongues knot.
 He groans.
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ It reflects you but is squishy.
 You touch it.
 
 Abruptly, the mirror strikes
-you with a sliver glow
+you with a silver glow
 and sucks you into nothingness.
 
 Next thing.
diff --git a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw
index 896a76b..a89aa5d 100644
--- a/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw
+++ b/nfsw/junk/coitus/fuck-mw
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 You skitter towards the bed.
 Strip.
-Fling yourself into on the bed.
+Fling yourself on the bed.
 Kiss her.
 Tongues knot.
 She moans.
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ It reflects you but is squishy.
 You touch it.
 
 Abruptly, the mirror strikes
-you with a sliver glow
+you with a silver glow
 and sucks you into it.
 Into nothingness.
 
diff --git a/nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm b/nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm
index be1bdef..5327674 100644
--- a/nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm
+++ b/nfsw/junk/coitus/intro-fm
@@ -9,9 +9,8 @@ reading Ray Bradbury's "Fahrenheit 451".
 He notices you at the other corner
 of the room. He puts the book aside and
 with carnal menace fingers his dick
-into a boner, then does a
-"I'll lick your pussy" V signal with his
-fingers and tongue.
+into a boner and shows you the V signal
+with his fingers and tongue.
 
 He lecherously stares at you for sometime
 and gets back to his book.